Корал Бич в марте 2008

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To Coral Beach Hotel Manager

Dear Sir!
We are very thankful for the excellent reception during our holidays in your nice hotel. We were perfectly enjoyed staying here for already three times.
We like this hotel very much because of the beautiful Kleopatra beach for naturists and the possibilities for nude recreation. I kindly ask you for further improving of its facilities and hope for more interest of the naturists from Russia & Ukraine that would be able to stay here with pleasure as we were.
Thanks you very much for your efforts.

Sincerely, Kelt Esq.

Немножко подкорректировал вышеприведенный текст, дабы он был больше похож на аглицкий:

To Coral Beach Hotel Manager

Dear Sir!
We are very thankful for the excellent reception during our holidays in your nice hotel. We were perfectly enjoyed staying here for already three times.
We like this hotel very much because of the beautiful Kleopatra beach for naturists and the possibilities for nude recreation. I kindly ask you for further improving of its facilities and hope for more interest of the naturists from Russia & Ukraine that would be able to stay here with pleasure as we were.
Thanks you very much for your efforts.

Sincerely, Kelt Esq.

Да, в последнем варианте отзыв более причесан под аглицкий!
Хотя и в первом варианте есть определенная доля наивного обаяния.